Title: Old Friends
URL: Fanfiction.net
Author: Kawii-chan
Source: Ranma 1/2
Rating: 4/6
Type: Alternate Universe
Length: 5 Chapters so far
Concept: What if Ryoga and Shampoo were old friends?
Characters: OK. Doesn’t fall blindly into tons of cliches and portrays the characters but their personalities don’t come through as clearly as they could.
Plotline: Original and entertaining.
Grammatical Quality: Meh, OK. Proofread and enjoyable but not what I’d call professional by any standard whatsoever.
Modifiers:
-1 There’s the occasional missed error and the author overused capitals to portray shouting. (There’s never a need for captials to portray shouting)
Note: I’d give this a 3.8/6 but my current rating system only lets me give 4/6 with a -1 modifier.
Fanfiction – “Old Friends” by Stephan Sokolow is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International License.
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