Recommended Battlestar Galactica “Earth-contact” fics

Last Updated: 2019-09-13 (Added “The Phoenix and the Wolverine”)

I’ve always enjoyed first-contact fics, because they’re a good way to stir up groups of people and see how they react. No plan survives contact with the enemy and no worldview survives first contact.

…but, in the case of Battlestar Galactica, having them find an Earth of comparable social development is often even better, because they’re not just going in with any old expectations, they have deeply held preconceptions about what they should find.

That makes for a rather unique “flavour”, but, like any slice of a fandom you look for, there’s a big gulf between the rare cream of the crop, and everything else.

…so, without further ado, here is my list of those special “Earth-contact” fics which deserve a read:

Best of the Best

The Consequences Of Not Being Polite by The Sidhe
Length: 266,212 Words
Status: Complete
Crossover: None
Strongest Element: Managing to feel like a sci-fi novel
In this fic, the fleeing colonial refugees are discovered by a forward patrol from an Earth at least a thousand years more advanced and slowly pushing back an equally advanced enemy descended from terran velociraptors.As is the case with most good “one side could curb-stomp the other” stories, this is a story about exploring and adjusting the worldviews of the less advanced factions, with the cylons also eventually coming to the table after Cavil’s failed attempt to ally with the raptors instead.I think one of the biggest reasons this appeals to me is how much effort the author puts into developing the backstory for the setting, which gives it a fairly strong “sci-fi novel” feel to it, rather than the generic “fanfic based on a sci-fi TV show or game” feel that I get from most fanfics.I’ve re-read this at least twice and I’d recommend that you give it a try if you’re even remotely interested in contact fics that don’t focus on combat.

Another story I can suggest with the same broad strokes but different details is Pandora’s Scions by NorJC. Sadly, it’s unfinished, and it’s not as memorably creative in its world-building, but it’s still novel-length, an enjoyable read and, starting about two thirds of the way through, it starts to offer up some memorable scenes exploring the Cylons as people.

Reunions Are A BitchDeleted by Bob Regent
Length: 349,784 Words
Status: Incomplete
Crossover: Stargate: SG-1
Strongest Element: Capturing the complexity and misunderstanding which drive wartime politics
In this Stargate SG-1 crossover (which had to be renamed on Fanfiction.net), after making contact with the Prometheus, the leadership of the Twelve Colonies decides that it would be good business and good politics to “reunite with the 13th colony”, by force if necessary.What I like about this story is that it’s a believable blending of the two settings with sort of a Cold War-esque dynamic:

  • Earth’s almost-nonexistent but much more advanced space defences barely fight off the massive Colonial fleet, but a few nuclear missiles do wind up hitting the planet.
  • The first act of the story leaves both sides assuming the other is much more prepared to counterattack and scrambling to build up defences.
  • World-changing events happen because of honest mistakes, ill-considered decisions, and greed.
  • Cylon infiltrators in Earth POW camps eventually ask for asylum.

An engaging fic which is one of the handful I’ve re-read over the years. Definitely one I’d recommend despite it being unfinished.

Gods Among Us by arturus
Length: 239,661 Words
Status: Incomplete
Crossover: Harry Potter, Stargate: SG-1
Strongest Element: World-building, lore, and exploring the cylons as characters
While not an Earth-contact fic in the strictest sense, given that Harry Potter and Hermione Granger come to them and their origins are kept secret until well into the story, this certainly fits all of the more abstract criteria much better than many other fics on this list.
The gist of the plot is that Harry Potter and Hermione Granger wind up on on one of the Colonial refugee ships as a result of finding a mothballed Furling ship which they accidentally activate, but the setup isn’t overly important and the flaws in chapter 1 are irrelevant once chapter 2 rolls around and they’re in space.
What makes this story so special is how satisfyingly deep its focus on the cylons and its world-building really are. While it does technically star Harry and Hermione as the main characters, it would be more accurate to say that, once the story gets going, they are revealed to merely be important players in a much larger narrative.
If you like lore, this is the fic for you. If you ever wished the cylons had been developed more as characters in general, this is the fic for you. If you like Galactica crossovers that don’t feel like the crossover characters are trying to steal the show, this is the fic for you.
Going Native by Rap541
Length: 156,591 Words
Status: Complete* with sequel
Crossover: Star Trek: The Next Generation
Strongest Element:Keeping a personal focus despite the scale of things
“What if Felix Gaeta were a Starfleet officer, stranded in the Beta quadrant on his first mission, and had to build a deep cover identity?” That’s the question that spawned this fic.
The story starts in a counselling session with Deanna Troi after the fleet has already made contact with the Enterprise, then bounces around from person to person (both Federation and Colonial)… something that it does quite well.
A big part of that success is probably down to this being half a first contact story, focused through the individual characters involved, and half a story about exploring this interpretation of Felix Gaeta as a character. The combination provides a nice balance that, while having similarities to The Consequences of Not Being Polite, is still quite different.
It’s a bit on the angsty side, but still a good read and it’s got its own uniquely clever ideas for various cylon-related things.
* This story is complete but isn’t marked as complete. As I remember, it predates Fanfiction.net’s support for supplying such metadata.
The Phoenix and the Wolverine by clavina
Length: 583,657 Words
Status: Incomplete
Crossover: X-Men, Star Trek (post-Voyager)
Strongest Element: World-building, lore, characters in general
This is one that is good for all the same reasons as Gods Among Us.Same abstract plot of taking a male and female hero who care for each other from the 20th-century and dropping them in a ship in the path of the Colonial fleet. Same heavy focus on the cylons as characters. Same heavy supply of world-building.What makes this one distinctive is how it accomplishes that.

First, it’s a multi-cross, combining X-Men, Star Trek, and Battlestar Galactica into a fused universe where the Eugenics Wars of Star Trek canon grew out of an attempt to create non-mutant super soldiers to “solve the mutant problem”.

Second, it uses Q Junior from Star Trek as a way to make the idea of a powerful author self-insert a bit more plausible… especially when the rest of the Q decide that he’s overstepped and lock him into the abilities he was professing when claiming to be the Emergency Medical and Engineering Hologram for the ship he built.

Speaking of the ship, there’s another difference. In Gods Among Us, the Furling ship used up its energy and Harry and Hermione don’t know how to use it. In this, you have a fully functional Federation-design ship helping the Colonials.

I don’t want to go into too much detail, but I will say that it’s good with its characters in general, from portraying Logan as intelligent but having no patience for machinations to having the Xavier’s computer start to develop into an A.I. in his own right.

It is a bit sloppy about its technicals early on (Sometimes, it talks about exiting hyperspace rather than exiting warp and it does have the occasional typo such as “of cause” or “wrap drive”.) but it’s not as bad about it as Contact at Kobol and I enjoy it very much.

Runners-up

These are stories which, while they’re good, don’t quite make the cut for reasons I’ll explain on a case-by-case basis:

Worldwar: Discovering the Balance by AlbertG
Length: Multiple Volumes
Status: 3 completed stories, 1 Incomplete
Crossover: Stargate: SG-1, Harry Turtledove’s Worldwar
Strongest Element: Focusing on individual OCs who have to deal with the violation of their expectations.
The main reason this story is a runner-up is that it’s hard to truly characterize it as a proper “BSG: Earth-contact” story.While the Colonies do come to play a major role and one volume does focus entirely on them, the story starts with the Worldwar-SG1 aspects and the Galactica stuff not only feels like an alternative take on RAAB, this story is supposedly intended to be set in the same multiverse and I feel like a reference to one of the other AlbertG-Bob Regent stories in the shared meta-setting only cheapens it by needlessly referencing an off-screen-and-before-story-start war with the Vorlons.That said, it’s still a story I liked enough to re-read. The basic plot is:

  1. A while before the story started, the Prometheus did encounter The 12 Colonies, but they parted without the colonies finding out where Earth is.
  2. The Race from Turtledove’s books arrives a few decades later than in canon and get a big shock when, instead of conquering the knights on horseback that they planned for, they’re met by a starship more advanced than their fleet in every way.
  3. The Race, being The Race, are forced to cope with a species that can crush them and refuses to acknowledge their ownership papers for “Tosev 3”, when they’ve not had to deal with the universe violating their expectations for ten thousand years.
  4. Because Gaius Baltar didn’t get fooled, the last handful of Cylon refugees wind up fleeing into Earth’s solar system by accident, where they successfully petition Earth for asylum.
  5. Earth manages to drive off the pursuing Colonials with no losses.
  6. The rest of the plot ensues.

If you want something that’s got similar elements to RAAB, but is mainly focused on forcing foreign cultures to face the fact that their expectations are wrong and then have them slowly develop relations with Earth as that happens, you’ll like this. I like how it develops its original characters to achieve said goals.

Contact at Kobol by wilkins75
Length: 478,758
Status: Complete
Crossover: Stargate: SG-1
Strongest Element: Having a boots-on-the-ground-oriented approach to a war without boring me into losing interest
If you wanted something similar in concept to RAAB, but with things escalating to a boots-on-the-ground invasion of The 12 Colonies, this is your story. I’ve always found following soldiers on the ground to make a story more boring, so I think the fact that I was willing to read this story to the end speaks well for it, even if I’ve yet to read it again.The main difference between this and the other SG-1 crossovers is probably that it takes place a little further in the future, when Earth has had time to study Asgard technology a bit and are about to reveal the Stargate so they can ease overpopulation in countries like India via a colony they’ve just finished building on a planet they’ve named Valhalla.The first encounter between Earth ships setting picket stations and a Colonial patrol along the Cylon border ends in disaster when the colonials mistake them for Cylons and lose several battlestars in the resulting skirmish.

While cooler heads do manage to arrange a diplomatic contact, relations eventually devolve (partly due to the discovery that Earth’s new colony is actually Kobol) and this eventually precipitates a war, which then gets stoked when a screw-up by a Colonial battlestar results in Disneyland Valhalla getting nuked.

I don’t want to spoil too much, so I’ll leave you to read the other memorable details yourself.

The main flaw I should mention is that it could use a second proofreading… but the typos aren’t excessive and it’s still perfectly readable.

UPDATE 2017-11-14: There is now also a sequel in progress which is better-proofread and mixes in Harry Turtledove’s Worldwar with a satisfying amount of focus on an apparently OC world that humanity chooses to help liberate from The Race.

Finally, I’ll point to Valkyrie by GreyWolfKnight as a completed self-insert that, while not about contact with Earth, is a well-written story that has it as part of the climax… just in case you or I need help re-identifying it and can only remember that aspect.

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