Fanfiction – “Goddess in the Mirror”

Title: Goddess in the Mirror
URL: http://www.thomasdye.com/fanfics/
Author: Bart Kelsey and Thomas Dye
Source: Oh! My Goddess/Aa! Megami-sama
Rating: 5.5/6
Type: Short series
Length: 5 Chapters (Complete. Sequel in progress.)

How might things have gone if Mara somehow managed to grant Keiichi’s wish before Belldandy could? I have to admit that I enjoy this story. Then again, I enjoy any well written story which manages to tie in a lot of computer references. Seriously though, I really do enjoy it a lot. I don’t know why but for some reason I can’t say much more about the story. Therefore, here’s a ratings breakdown.

Grammar: 5/6 (I’ve only ever applied a 6/6 grammar rating to things I re-read so far)
Originality: 4.5/6 (Re-uses the old storyline events in the old setting but in a new way)
Overall: 5.5/6
+1 Bonus for ending at the end of the story arc and starting a sequel
+1 Bonus for feeling of quality in the characters

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